"An oblivious death of a grotesque nightmare... blood dripping from it's decapitated abysmal body... the silhouette of the moon... overwhelmed completely by darkness... deceased bodies everywhere... while a sharp knife... thrusted at my head... covering my face with blood... as my head departs from my body... death is grinning... right beside me... isn't it a lovely sight?..." that's me... so don't you dare give a crap... im warning you! i have a dead salmon in my hand... and im not afraid to use it!

September 30, 2004

i hate you...
Posted at 10:19 AM

im starting to hate my panda.... im sorry.... f**k you.... why... i can't believe you.... sorry... i dedicate this poem that i made to you... and all the guys who made my life such pure sh*t... curse you gays.... sorry...

I made this poem just for you
coz i want you to know that i love you
from the bottom of my heart so true
i hope that you will love me too...

How i wish to see your face
overwhelmed with such disgrace
bashed against the bathroom floor
and that sweet face wich i abhor...

How i dream of your sentimental death
and the final gasping of your breath
the lovely sight of you guillotined head
gives me such plesant dreams in bed...

Feel sanctified while you're ashamed
coz i am free and you are blamed
i'll slaughter you like a butchered cow
smile and say "Look who's laughing now?"

You feel the essence of sweet adore
can't you see thier faint smiles you wh*re?
grotesque writings on your wall
and your animosities won't care at all...

You feel that you're superior to all
but your pretencious refuge soon will fall
you stole everything that was mine
you greedy fa**ot you flagrant swine!

But now your foolish luck was gone
you shall die... it has to be done
i'll decapitate you and bid goodbye
and to reward myself i'll eat some pie....
Deftone's My Own Summer

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s7even

Comment posted on October 4th, 2004 at 07:38 AM
is love equal to hatred?
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deft_sheep

Comment posted on October 4th, 2004 at 08:09 AM
for me.. yes it is.
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serial

Comment posted on October 2nd, 2004 at 01:26 PM
nice!!! lovely in fact!!! weeee!!! *showers you with blood* lovely lovely poem! you made my day lighter! thank you!
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deft_sheep

Comment posted on October 4th, 2004 at 08:10 AM
hahaha... :) thanks! i enjoyed doing it myself! hahaha... *grabs a gun* isn't it fun? hahahaha..
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rosemary

Comment posted on October 1st, 2004 at 10:22 AM
waw. that's a raving fact.
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deft_sheep

Comment posted on October 2nd, 2004 at 05:19 AM
hahahah... :D a raving fact indeed hehe... :)
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superunkn0wn2

Comment posted on September 30th, 2004 at 05:00 PM
so much angst..
so much pain..

the likely title of your poem is "kill kill kill"

good thing you're using a keyboard.. hard to stab one with it.

im having second thoughts if you're going to use a pen.

lighten up, kill a friend.
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deft_sheep

Comment posted on October 1st, 2004 at 06:58 AM
hahaha... thanks... that made me smile.. :) haha.. i know... kill kill kill.... yeah.. i know.. if im going to use a ballpen.. well.... ill be breaking it into bits before i use it... haha :) what do you think of my poem?
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